is it really that bad?

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Kaliegh Brenner flashed her signature sweet smile at the crowd of paparazzi shoving microphones in her face and flashing pictures. She was wearing a simple black dress by the row paired with her favorite gunmetal grey Loubotin booties. Of course the press was having a hay day with the news that hollywoods hottest actress was suspending all of her acting projects to attend the prestigious willheart academy in upstate new York. From children of dignitaries all over the world to the offspring manhattens socialites willheart was no stranger to the wealthy and gorgeous but she would be the first actual celebrity to walk the halls. She subconsciously tossed her sheet of titan red locks over her shoulder and stalked thorugh the bustle to reach the copper plated security gate. She quikly fished her shiny newly laminated student ID out of her Henry Cuir satchel, and placed it face down over the bright LED lit security pad. The pad blinked once and the gate slid open and then quikly shut again upon her entrance. As she walked away from the gate and down the path leading to the Ivy covered buildings which made up her new home for two years , the noise from the press faded and she closed her eyes. She smiled, a real smile not the kind she did for the cameras but a smile you make when you are truly happy. A new start was just what she needed and she was sure she would be able to find it here.

5 Responses for “is it really that bad?”

  1. Sunshine says:

    It’s Lisi Harrison-ish. (She’s good) Decent, I would say

  2. Anne Loan says:

    is this a passage you wrote?
    the writing is not bad, but maybe include more complex vocabulary to make it more interesting.

  3. Lindsey Berger says:

    good story?

  4. $tar<3 says:

    Didn’t really understand your question, i think its a story? If it is, its good
    Answer mine please http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AozJpyHgjHvvwiPp0JveZErsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100827230722AAwEfze

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